Balloons wonderla

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Balloons wonderla

Colourful balloons flying higher
            Amidst the billions underneath
Booming to colour under showers
          That brings forth rain henceforth


Whats that clarity ruling one's charm
          Ones queerness in the sense of wind
That seldom finds the truth in itself
             And chases the quantum being lost.

Higher is the flight for fun
            Making a kids gasp of time
That sheds minute sense of exasperation
           Bringing one to steal all worries

There comes the clouds so near
            The roof under heavens boundaries
Paving way for silence to speed
           Through the monotony of the flier

Questions comes to one deep within
           Regarding losing one in the air
But the dearth wipes away all that disturbs
             And brings power to the human mind

All towers I would have seen
          Rather seen the wideness of oceans
And the particles beneath the intricate humanliness
          Giving surprise shocks to the twin lovers - the balloon and the kid

Risking one to slow down
        Hence to bring it close to the ground
And wondering the hardness of time
          That kept you up and down.

        S ANANDHI
        06/06/20

Comments

Anandhi Srinivasan said…
The balloons fly high up in the sky through rain and wind. The height is fun for kids and it removes the worries. Their speed removes the monotony of the life and brings power to the human mind. After a journey full of shocks and surprises both the balloon and the kid have a safe landing. The reader too feels the adventurous journey and this is the success of the poem.
Manoharan sir
June 7, 2020 at 2:03 AM
Anandhi Srinivasan said…
👌🎈👏 Suresh uncle
June 7, 2020 at 2:03 AM
Anandhi Srinivasan said…
A beautiful appreciation of the poem with the eyes of a poet. My best complements to you for your angles.
Appa
June 7, 2020 at 2:04 AM
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