A heavenly dance!

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A heavenly dance!


Whats up upon the hole in the roof top
Stars blinking in the sky
Wide I could see flowers yet to blossom
It could be in the next morning when the dawn strikes
The bees singing and dancing around the hive
The butterflies around the flowers tasting the heavenly juice
The fishes in bluish waters swimming in the ocean
The birds flying in the high sky
Am I an evesdroper above the rocks
Marvelled at the sound of waters in the falls below
What could be the reason for this heavenly dance
Where does time carry one to?
It is right that one sticks onto the intricacies of nature
It is where the whole world dwells upon.
You are a nature's soothsayer
If you reveal this
 heavenly secret.


   S ANANDHI
    06/05/20

Comments

Anandhi Srinivasan said…
Very nice .To Anandhi from Arasuthambi.
May 8, 2020 at 6:01 AM
Anandhi Srinivasan said…
👌👌👌 RajaRamalingam sir
May 8, 2020 at 6:02 AM
Anandhi Srinivasan said…
Nature's beautiful heavenly dance.I am failed to find a good suitable tune for this dance.It is still dancing in my mind .Fantastic. 👌
Suresh uncle
May 8, 2020 at 6:03 AM
Anandhi Srinivasan said…
Beautiful.preethi Priya
May 8, 2020 at 6:04 AM
Anandhi Srinivasan said…
Nice. Cut last sixlines.Leave the rest to the readers.periappa
May 8, 2020 at 6:05 AM
Anandhi Srinivasan said…
Nice. Cut last sixlines.Leave the rest to the readers.periappa
May 8, 2020 at 6:12 AM
Anandhi Srinivasan said…
Nature reveals itself in various ways to a poet. And here it is a heavenly dance.We find a good collection of all that is beautiful in nature.The birds, fish, waterfalls and so on. The intricacies of Nature can't be revealed by the ordinary man for he can only marvel at that. The poet is very much justified in calling this a heavenly secret. Very fine start and a surprising finish. Well done!
Manoharan sir
May 8, 2020 at 6:12 AM
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