Daily fragrance

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Daily fragrance

The rose sold it's daily fragrance
To the holder with pure satisfaction
The man took the flower with utmost care
Put it to the hair of his beautiful girl
The rose gave it's scent to the head it worn
For it did not last for long
After a day it was thrown to the dustbin
For one days life a rose holds
It's not cheap for a human to near a hundred
Then he is thrown out under the ground
For his daily fragrance worn by his love until the end.


   S ANANDHI
     23/05/20

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Anandhi Srinivasan said…
👌👌👌 RajaRamalingam sir
May 27, 2020 at 5:42 AM
Anandhi Srinivasan said…
Smelt the fragrance of the poem.Mesmerized me.
That scented rose may
be short lived.But the
fragrance which it shed
is everlasting as a memoir in the heart of
that beautiful girl.
Fantastic.
Suresh uncle
May 27, 2020 at 5:43 AM
Anandhi Srinivasan said…
மணவியலும்
மனவியலும்
குறித்து
பூச்சூடிய
கவிதை
பொன்னான
கவிதை!👌🏻💐💐
Manivannan sir
May 27, 2020 at 5:44 AM
Anandhi Srinivasan said…
This is the way that you should write your future poetry. Only by the poems with clear picture and message like these ,there is a possibility that you may grow in your assumed field. As a person interested in good poetry, I find your present piece as a beautiful one. Be always simple and clear like these ........A reader of good poems.
Appa
May 27, 2020 at 5:44 AM
Anandhi Srinivasan said…
Daily fragrance is a fine thought. Congrats Continue. Good luck.
Periappa
May 27, 2020 at 5:45 AM
Anandhi Srinivasan said…
This is a beautiful poem that speaks about the rose. The rose adds to the charm of the girl with it's scent though it has a short life. It also reminds us of the value of love in our life.A sweet and beautiful comparison that enriches the poem.!
Manoharan sir
May 27, 2020 at 5:46 AM
Anandhi Srinivasan said…
*Very good poetic concept.* பூக்களைப் பறிக்காதீங்க. தானா விழும் ரோஜாவை சூடிக்கொள்ளுங்க.
அதிக நாள் வாசத்துடன் தங்களுடன் வாசம் கொள்ளும் என்று சொல்லத் தோன்றுகிறது.
Devaraj sir
May 27, 2020 at 5:47 AM
Anandhi Srinivasan said…
*Very good poetic concept.* பூக்களைப் பறிக்காதீங்க. தானா விழும் ரோஜாவை சூடிக்கொள்ளுங்க.
அதிக நாள் வாசத்துடன் தங்களுடன் வாசம் கொள்ளும் என்று சொல்லத் தோன்றுகிறது.
Devaraj sir
May 27, 2020 at 5:47 AM
Anandhi Srinivasan said…
One day life for rose is equalent to a man's life.😄👌👌👌amma
May 27, 2020 at 5:49 AM
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