BEAUTY

Beauty

In the cradle of my heart
I bore her
To swim across the oceans
Of no ends, with love.

When she was a baby
In the arms of her mom
I shut neighbour's eyes
Upon the iron of my soul.

When she reached ten
I rose to awaken her spirits
To free her from
Fears of devil.

As she reached teens
I thought to teach
The weapon of self
To defend her from bad.

When she was married
I cried like a beggar
Of not to leave my heart
Barren of all that I saved until then.

When I saw her little one
With reflection of my own
As love lasts forever
In all the beauty I lay...
     S ANANDHI
      17/04/20

Comments

The same I felt.But my daughter finds it very easier to write english poems than tamil poems.O.K.Let it go and let us see how far the thing goes.Thanks to you Ramalingam.
'When she was married I cried like a beggar of not to leave my heart ' These lines touched my heart. Wounded soldier knows effect of the pain. Nice poem.
Suresh uncle
You catch the point being the father of a daughter. I am not so kind like you.
A baby becomes a teen,and the teen grows into a mother.simultaniously , a mother becomes a grandma. A lovely and beautiful depiction of womanhood.nice poem!
Manoharan sir
Enjoyed the poem.very nice.👍
Suresh uncle
This spirit too after understanding a little of Eliot only.
This poem by you is much different from the previous ones.It is a journey which celebrates Nature, speaks of it's philosophy and ends with a tone of hope. Seeing stars upon the roofs of my broken walls - this is a gem! My best wishes to you!
Manoharan sir
Yes. I too concur with you and the product is from the your mentioning of the poem of. T. S . Eliot. I got it assured from ger that she wrote it today and that is why the change in her style and clarity. I thank you all for bringing from her the new poems.Thank you.
Yes. I too concur with you and the product is from the your mentioning of the poem of. T. S . Eliot. I got it assured from ger that she wrote it today and that is why the change in her style and clarity. I thank you all for bringing from her the new poems.Thank you.
Thank you very much my dear friend.
Vasanth , Best wishes to your daughter for her. ". Throw past to dust. " . Past is Past . 6th and 8 stanza strikes future I think .
...... very Nice .To Anandhi.. from my friend Arasuthambi.
What a hopefu
l. Rain and shine folllow in your mind
Congrats
Vaiyavan
What a hopefu
l. Rain and shine folllow in your mind
Congrats
Vaiyavan
Keep on rocking .Again to Anandhi from Arasuthambi.

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